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You walk silently down the halls of the Phantomhive Manor, a load of clean sheets in your arms. Your maid uniform goes down to a few inches below your knees. You also have on tall black heeled boots and white tights. (Now you're probably wondering why is there another maid in the Phantomhive Manor? What about Meyrin? Well…wait a minute and you'll see!)

"______!" Sebastian calls for you. You turn, your red eyes gleaming slightly in the dim hall. You're a demon, just like Sebastian. But you do not belong to Ciel, no. You are one of Master Sebastian's (as you call him now) servants from the other side. He called you here as help, seeing how the others in the house…do more harm than good. The name Sebastian had just called was appointed to you by Sebastian's master. You walk down the hall. As you stride down the steps, you spot Sebastian. He stands arms crossed at the bottom of the staircase.

"Yes, Master Sebastian?" You ask.

"The Young Master's fiancée is paying the manor a visit. He is refusing to allow me to give him another refreshing course for his dance skills," He says, "Will you teach him?"

"Yes, sir," you say with a bow.

"I shall be accompanying you," he says. You both turn and head back up the steps.
"Now, Young Master," you say, one hand on Ciel's shoulder, the other in his hand, "Place your hand on my waist." He looks down, placing his hand on your waist, a small blush on his cheeks. He mumbles under his breath.

"Good," you say, flashing one of your signature smiles, "Now you always start with your left foot." You take a step back with your left foot, Ciel copying you. He however, steps on your toes. You wince, but maintain your smile.

"Now move into a natural turn," You say. As you do so, Ciel takes too big of a step. His foot goes behind yours, tripping you. You release his shoulders, falling back. But you don't fall. Sebastian catches you, holding you slightly against him.

"Now Young Master," Sebastian says, as he helps you back to your feet, "You did not do this poorly when I taught you."

"Ugh!" Ciel sighs.

"Watch us, sir," Sebastian says, making you face him. He places his hand on your waist. He nods at you. You smile and put your hand on his shoulder, taking his in your other. He counts the beats out loud as you both dance.

"A dance between devils," Ciel laughs, "What an interesting sight."
Elizabeth came over that afternoon.

"Well aren't you such a lovely girl!" She says happily when she meets you. You bow, a kind smile on your face.

"But why do you only wear black?" She says putting her hands on her hips, "You're just like Sebastian. Pretty girls wear pretty colors like pink! And I have some dresses that will look lovely on you!" She grabs your wrist.

"M-My lady, that is not necessary," you say, almost plead as she drags you forward.

"Of course it is!" She says, "Everything has to be cute when I dance with Ciel. Now, let's find a dress to go with those red eyes of yours!" She drags you up the steps. You look at the group and mouth the words "Help me!" Sebastian gives you a smile. Meyrin, Baldroy, and Finnian laugh as you're dragged off. Sebastian glares at them, making them hush.
"Here you go!" Elizabeth says, throwing you a white dress, "That will go lovely with your eyes! Now change!" You do as you're told. As you change, Elizabeth waiting impatiently behind your back, she notices something.

"Is that a tattoo?" She asks curiously. You stiffen up. The tattoo she is talking about is a covenant (similar to the one on Sebastian's hand and Ciel's eye) in between your shoulder blades and two black wing tattoos on both sides. This tattoo is the thing that kept you with Sebastian. They're important to you because he's the one who placed them there.  

"Why do you have a tattoo? Pretty girls shouldn't have tattoos. We'll have to cover these," She says.

"N-No!" You say, turning to face her. She looks at you, both shocked and angry.

"M-My Lady, these…keep me connected to someone important to me," You say softly, your head bowed, "I dare not cover them." She looks at you blankly.

"Oh," she says, "That's kind of sweet! Is it a guy?" She asks.

"Y-Yes," you say, smiling as you get dressed in what she'd given you to wear.
You and Elizabeth walk down the stairs. Everyone looks up at you two. You see that Sebastian had gotten the band assembled and Ciel dressed as Elizabeth told him to.

"Shall we dance?" Ciel bows to Elizabeth when you both reach the bottom of the stairs. You step to the side. Elizabeth takes Ciel's hand and step out. The band begins playing. You sway slightly to the music as you stand beside Finny, Baldo, Meyrin, and Tanaka. Suddenly Sebastian walks up to your group. He bows in front of you, holding his hand out to you.

"A lady should never be left out of a dance," He says looking up at you with a smile, "May I?"

"Yes, sir," you say taking his hand. He leads you out onto the floor. You both take the position as before when teaching Ciel. You both dance gracefully around the floor.

"They look like angels," Finny says.

"I wish I could dance with Mister Sebastian, I do," Meyrin says.

The song ends soon. Sebastian leads you off the floor, leaving Ciel and Elizabeth to dance the rest of the evening. He leads off the floor, but not to the group. He leads you through a door into a dark hall to the side. You can see his red eyes glowing slightly in the dark and your eyes quickly adjust so you can see him fully.

"We never got the chance to dance like that, did we ____?" He says.

"Not once," You say. You lean slightly against the wall, closing your eyes as you listen to the music playing outside. Suddenly when you open your eyes again, Sebastian is in front of you, his right hand on the wall behind you. You look up shocked at him, his devious smile on his lips.

"I have to say," he says putting his other hand on you back and pulling you closer, "You move with the grace of a dove." He runs his hand up your back, tracing the feathers of your tattoos like he can see them.

"Or should I say a raven," he says.

"Master Seba-" You say before he presses his lips against yours. Your eyes go wide. For once, a blush stretches across your cheeks. Sebastian pushes you slightly back against the wall. By now, you give in. You kiss him back, your eyes flutter closed. You arms snake up to wrap around his neck. He moves his hand over your covenant tattoo. It burns slightly and glows through your dress.

"Oh my!" Someone cries, making you two pull apart. You the light from the door blinds you both for a moment. When you can see, you see the whole rest of the household. Meyrin had fainted, Finny trying to wake her.

"Well, well, well," Ciel says with a smile.

"Y-Young Master," Sebastian says, slightly embarrassed, "How long have you been there?"

"Just a few seconds," Ciel says, "Long enough for Meyrin to faint though." You blush bright red and turn your face away from the group. Sebastian laughs. He makes you look up at him.

"It seems I can't hide this from them any longer then," He says, "Shall we my Raven? We must prepare dinner."

"Yes, we must, sir," You say. You both turn down the hall, away from the group. You both walk down the hall, which coincidentally leads to the kitchen. When you two are out of sight, Sebastian takes your hand.

"Shall we continue that later?" He asks, his eyes glowing again.

"Yes, Master Sebastian," You say with a smile, your eyes glowing too.              
Oh yes. ^^ Sebby needs love. Another first on DA I think. For Lovers series wise. :D I actually got this idea in History when we weren't doing anything. Besides making Hetalia references in there, I get a lot of fanfiction ideas. :)

All characters belong to Yana Toboso. :D
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
*dies of cuteness*
Nightmare2015 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist
I want to know what happens next! This is so cool! \,,/(^_^)\,,/
MrsMichaelis69 Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You should do part two. A suggestion we would all enjoy.
Roseflora5 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
I want to read more...XD
AlchemistWitch14 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014
lol nice
Dynasty101Warriors Featured By Owner May 9, 2014
I think I was about to faint yet I just can't stop think of this fact.. 'In this story I'm suppose to be a demon.. But... My name is... Angel... O_o.. Then I was called some kind of angel-- .. No it was Raven... Wow...

My name is Angel and my race is a demon!? XD

Great story!!
RuthMartos Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOOOOOOORE! >w< Oh god Oh god <3 <3
Yumi-Star-Michaelis Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014
:happybounce: Hug :squee: Judge MORE PLEASE~

vampeva-97 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i.. i think i just died.. 

Moonlight500 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013
Amazing you are just amazing :D
trixy-the-fox312-459 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
MaliciousJoy Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my >:3 splendid fiction xD
pichiruchi1 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2013
Sassyslove Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*swoons* m-my word this is an amazing fan fiction I think you should write more!
AlexTheRotten Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah..ah...That was just...whoa....freakin' love it dude!!!!^.^ one of the best I have read : D
MsCrevan Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
M..more plz @.@
MariaMichaelis Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013
RosalindeUchiha Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
I love this! Could you please continue it? I think it'd be a very intresting story...
Thundertigress Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
:squee: I loved this so much X3!
SebastiansLover Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
oookayyyyy....this is very odd! my oc for BB is almost exactly like the maid in this readerr insert! omgz...well, i guess that shows that great minds think alike! lol...and i promise i did not steal any of this from you...i guess we both think that kissing the girl is something Sebasstian would do...weell, uh, yea. great job on this! i enjoyed and loved it very much.

like :iconpuppies282: said....i am very obsessed with i thank you for writing this magnificent reader insert!!!!
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2012
Coincidences! :D They seem to happen a lot with my stories. :XD: I'm really glad you enjoyed it.
And we all know Sebby needs his love, be it from another demon or so one. ;) Thank you so much for commenting and reading. :D And I'm quite in love with the seductive demon myself. ;) We fangirls must stick together!
SebastiansLover Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
You're so very welcome! Yes! We must! :D
darkAngel945 Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2012
*SQUEALS* i love it!
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2012  Student General Artist
loved it ^^
Ecipoe Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2012
I had a fangirl moment there......
darkcherry264 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
omg i named a oc raven once and she had red eyes and a tatoo also. my friend told me about this, i was like this persons got good taste though. im so happy u made this
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
OMG awesome coincidence!
Glad you enjoyed it. :D
darkcherry264 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
IKR. I didnt enjoy it i loved it!
vampire1324 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
i luv sebastian so much u should write more of this story
PsychicHexo Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so amazingly awesome, I have no words to describe how amazingly awesome it is!
Wildheart63 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
O_____O Where was this all my life! ^-^
X0x0kuro0x0X Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Yes!!! thank you! ones like these are hard to find^^
and its so well made, do you plan to make a second?
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011
Glad you enjoyed it. :D
Hm, I'm plotting a couple more Kuroshitsuji ones, and maybe another for Sebastian.
X0x0kuro0x0X Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2011  Student General Artist
yes please!!!XDD
ScarletCelest Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Student
Celelst: So cute!!! I love it. I have horrible luck in finding fanfics with Sebastian that are good and with an OC. Wonderful job. ^_^
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011
Well glad you found mine and you liked it. :D
ScarletCelest Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Student
SeikoTaijiya Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
-fangirl squeal-
puppies282 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
o goodness YESH!!! *holds face* OH SEBASTIAN!!! (srry its a thing my friend and i do.) speaking of my friend she would LOVE this 10000xmore than me cause shes obsessed with Sebastian. :giggle:
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
Glad you like it. :D (And don't worry. Me and my friend have our inside things too ;P)
puppies282 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:D tehe :P
Lovelorne Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
eep. *pulls a meyrin and faints*

The world has never seen a smirk hotter than Sebastian's.
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011
:iconsebbyplz::iconsaysplz:Thank you, my lady.
Lovelorne Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Writer
Lol, You're welcome!
RoyEdAl221 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
omg!!! i loved was so awesome.....and i just love Sebastian!!!
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
Glad you enjoyed it. :D I do too~
RoyEdAl221 Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011
hahaha who doesnt XD
yunaXsora Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I know I already commented, but you really should do another one.
ZexionFanGirl123 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
I'm planning on maybe one for Ciel and maybe Sebby.
yunaXsora Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I see
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